From d80603d70f1dbd7bc12f9fe2d67ab25f4b60cc56 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Blaise Thompson <blaise@untzag.com>
Date: Thu, 5 Apr 2018 12:09:16 -0500
Subject: 2018-04-05 12:09

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 Coherent multidimensional spectroscopy (CMDS) encompasses a family of experimental strategies
 involving the nonlinear interaction between electric fields and a material under investigation.  %
 This approach has several unique capabilities: 1. resolving congested states [CITE KLUG and % JCW Zhao and Wright-JACS], 
-2. extracting spectra that would otherwise be selection-rule disslowed [CITE BOYLE], 3. resolving
+2. extracting spectra that would otherwise be selection-rule disallowed [CITE BOYLE], 3. resolving
 fully coherent dyanmics [CITE % JCW Pakoulev and Wright], 
 4. measuring coupling [CITE], and 5. resolving ultrafast dynamics
 [CITE].  %
@@ -15,10 +15,10 @@ CMDS can be collected in the frequency or the time domain, and each approach has
 disadvantages.  %
 Frequency domain ``Multi-resonant'' CMDS (MR-CMDS) requires pulsed ultrafast light sources with
 tunable output frequencies.  %
-These frequency-tunable pulses are directed into a material under investigation.  %
+These pulses are directed into a material under investigation.  %
 The pulses interact with the material, and due to the specific interference between the multiple
 fields the material is driven to emit a new pulse: the MR-CMDS signal.  %
-This new pulse may be different in frequency from the input pulses, and it may travel in a new
+This signal may be different in frequency from the input pulses, and it may travel in a new
 direction depending on the exact experiment being performed.  %
 The MR-CMDS experiment involves tracking the intensity of this output signal as a function of
 different properties of the excitation pulses.  %
@@ -31,10 +31,10 @@ Because MR-CMDS is a family of related-but-separate experiments, each of them a
 space, there are special challenges that must be addressed when designing a general-purpose MR-CMDS
 instrument.  %
 These issues require development of software, hardware, and theory.  %
-Five different improvements to MR-CMDS are presented in \hyperref[prt:development]{Part II:
-  Development}: 1. processing software (\autoref{cha:pro}), 2. acquisition software
-(\autoref{cha:aqn}) 3, active artifact correction ([REF]), 4. automated OPA calibration
-(\autoref{cha:opa}), and 5. finite pulse accountancy (\autoref{cha:mix}).  %
+Five different improvements to MR-CMDS are presented in this dissertation: 1. processing software
+(\autoref{cha:pro}), 2. acquisition software (\autoref{cha:acq}) 3, active artifact correction
+(\autoref{cha:act}), 4. automated OPA calibration (\autoref{cha:opa}), and 5. finite pulse
+accountancy (\autoref{cha:mix}).  %
 \hyperref[prt:background]{Part I: Background} introduces relevant literature which informs on this
 development work.  %
 Finally, \hyperref[prt:applications]{Part III: Applications} presents three examples where these
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