From ba8235a76c56f6fba6eb9919f3a64054f17fe79d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: John Wright <wright@chem.wisc.edu>
Date: Thu, 5 Apr 2018 07:41:09 -0500
Subject: JCW Summary of Changes

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 introduction/chapter.tex | 7 ++++---
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@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ flexable in the kinds of experiments that they can perform.  %
 This dissertation contains several projects undertaken to improve the reliability and accessibility
 of MR-CMDS.  %
 While MR-CMDS will never be a single-shot experiment, there are many improvements that can improve
-data collection speed.  %
+data collection speed.  % JCW- NOT SO SURE IT CAN'T BE SINGLE SHOT
 Necessary calibration, especially OPA calibration, can be made robust and fully automatic.  %
 Common artifacts can be addressed through relatively simple modifications in hardware and
 software.  %
@@ -64,11 +64,12 @@ frequency-domain coherent multidimensional spectroscopy.  %
 Due to its diversity and dimensionality, MR-CMDS data is challenging to process and represent.  %
 The data processing tools that a scientist develops to process one experiment may not work when she
 attempts to process an experiment where different experimental variables are explored.  %
-Historically, this has meant that MR-CMDS practitioners have used custom, one-off data processing
+Historically, this % JCW- "THIS" SHOULDN'T BE A NOUN STANDING ALONE AS THE SUBJECT OF THE SENTENCE
+has meant that MR-CMDS practitioners have used custom, one-off data processing
 workflows that need to be changed for each particular experiment.  %
 These changes take time to implement, and can become stumbling blocks or opportunities for
 error.  %
-Even worse, the challenge of designing a new processing workflow may make dissuade scientist from
+Even worse, the challenge of designing a new processing workflow may dissuade A scientist from
 creatively modifying their experimental strategy, or comparing their data with data taken from
 another group.  %
 This limit to creativity and flexibility defeats one of the main advantages of the MR-CMDS
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