From d80603d70f1dbd7bc12f9fe2d67ab25f4b60cc56 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Blaise Thompson <blaise@untzag.com>
Date: Thu, 5 Apr 2018 12:09:16 -0500
Subject: 2018-04-05 12:09

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 introduction/chapter.tex | 12 ++++++++----
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diff --git a/introduction/chapter.tex b/introduction/chapter.tex
index b8877e6..109f692 100644
--- a/introduction/chapter.tex
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@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ there is no theoretical limit to the frequency range that can be resolved in thi
 MR-CMDS can be homodyne-detected, so experiments with unique output colors are much more
 accessible.  %
 Finally, because the components are more self-contained, MR-CMDS instruments tend to be more
-flexable in the kinds of experiments that they can perform.  %
+flexible in the kinds of experiments that they can perform.  %
 
 % TODO: boilerplate about the kinds of things that make up an MR-CMDS instrument... OPAs, delays...
 
@@ -69,13 +69,13 @@ has meant that MR-CMDS practitioners have used custom, one-off data processing
 workflows that need to be changed for each particular experiment.  %
 These changes take time to implement, and can become stumbling blocks or opportunities for
 error.  %
-Even worse, the challenge of designing a new processing workflow may dissuade A scientist from
+Even worse, the challenge of designing a new processing workflow may dissuade a scientist from
 creatively modifying their experimental strategy, or comparing their data with data taken from
 another group.  %
 This limit to creativity and flexibility defeats one of the main advantages of the MR-CMDS
 strategy.  %
-\autoref{cha:pro} describes a new software package, WrightTools, that greatly simplifies CMDS data
-processing.  %
+Chapter \ref{cha:pro} describes a new software package, WrightTools, that greatly simplifies CMDS
+data processing.  %
 WrightTools defines a \emph{universal format} that is capable of representing any CMDS dataset,
 regardless of dimensionality or the axes scanned.  %
 A set of simple functions are used to convert raw data into this universal format.  %
@@ -177,6 +177,10 @@ Chapter [...] describes an experiment performed on PEDOT:PSS.
 useful because...
 we learned...
 
+% BJT: consider getting rid of the following paragraph
+% if it remains, it needs to address a more 'broader impacts approach' rather than simply
+% re-summarizing
+
 Despite challenges in software, hardware, and theory MR-CMDS is a crucial tool in the hands of
 scientists.  %
 This dissertation describes several ways to make MR-CMDS more accessible through software and
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